Welcome to forTUNEately, a webcomic improvisation. ForTUNEately is the epic (mis)adventures of Terrible Bard and Crossdressing Chick in the the Land of Wonder. Unsatisfied with the monotony of Boredom Brook, they set out to discover the beauty of the world.
Thursday, July 28, 2011
Teaser Page?
Monday, July 25, 2011
Exposition Thumbnails
Page 1: No dialogue, but if there are titles I think they could go here.
Page 2:
- Panel 2: (sounds effect) BONK
- Panel 3:
- Angry tavern person (not seen): “AND STAY OUT”
- Title: Theodore Barnaby: The Worst Bard
Page 3:
- Panel 1: TB: “Sigh”
- Panel 2: “It’s hard to be an artist.”
- Panel 3: “No one understands!”
- Panel 4: “Hey!”
- Panel 5:
“Unhand me, you-“
“Argh”
Page 4:
- Panel 1: TB: “What’s this?”
- Panel 2: (sound effect) Tkch
- Panel 3: TB: “A dragon, huh?”
Page 5:
- Panel 1:
- TB: “I’ve heard dragons hoard magical items. Maybe this one has a magical instrument, one that could make me a less mediocre musician…”
- “That would be…”
- Panel 3:
-TB: “Well, what would you know!”
- “You’re just a pony!”
- Panel 4:
- Mysterious Silhouette (CC): “You’re actually right.”
- TB: “Ah!”
- MS: “That dragon’s got to be really rich.”
Page 6:
- Panel 1:
- MS: “And with the reward the king’s offering for it…”
-Panel 2:
- MS (revealed as CC): “That’ll make me one rich hero.”
- Title: “C. Cloudsworth: Dragonslayer???”
Page 7:
- Panel 1: TB: “You’re kind of skinny for a dragon killer.”
- Panel 2: CC: “I can manage.”
- Panel 3:
- TB: “No need to get defensive!”
- “What’s your name, adventurer?”
- Panel 4:
- CC: “Uh”
- “Claude.”
- Panel 5:
- TB: “Rhymes with ‘applaud’ and ‘maraud’?”
- CC: “Y-Yup.”
Page 8:
Panel 1:
- TB: “Cool! I’m Theo Barnaby, I’m a musician!”
- “We…”
Panel 2:
- TB: “We should team up!”
- “Against that dragon?”
Panel 3: CC: “Hmmmm.”
Panel 4:
- CC: “Okay.”
- TB: “Yaaay!”
Page 9:
- TB: “Adventure awaits!”
- Title: “And so the quest begins”
Edited by Anaiira: Some Really Excellent Critique: Found here.