Page 1: No dialogue, but if there are titles I think they could go here.
Page 2:
- Panel 2: (sounds effect) BONK
- Panel 3:
- Angry tavern person (not seen): “AND STAY OUT”
- Title: Theodore Barnaby: The Worst Bard
Page 3:
- Panel 1: TB: “Sigh”
- Panel 2: “It’s hard to be an artist.”
- Panel 3: “No one understands!”
- Panel 4: “Hey!”
- Panel 5:
“Unhand me, you-“
“Argh”
Page 4:
- Panel 1: TB: “What’s this?”
- Panel 2: (sound effect) Tkch
- Panel 3: TB: “A dragon, huh?”
Page 5:
- Panel 1:
- TB: “I’ve heard dragons hoard magical items. Maybe this one has a magical instrument, one that could make me a less mediocre musician…”
- “That would be…”
- Panel 3:
-TB: “Well, what would you know!”
- “You’re just a pony!”
- Panel 4:
- Mysterious Silhouette (CC): “You’re actually right.”
- TB: “Ah!”
- MS: “That dragon’s got to be really rich.”
Page 6:
- Panel 1:
- MS: “And with the reward the king’s offering for it…”
-Panel 2:
- MS (revealed as CC): “That’ll make me one rich hero.”
- Title: “C. Cloudsworth: Dragonslayer???”
Page 7:
- Panel 1: TB: “You’re kind of skinny for a dragon killer.”
- Panel 2: CC: “I can manage.”
- Panel 3:
- TB: “No need to get defensive!”
- “What’s your name, adventurer?”
- Panel 4:
- CC: “Uh”
- “Claude.”
- Panel 5:
- TB: “Rhymes with ‘applaud’ and ‘maraud’?”
- CC: “Y-Yup.”
Page 8:
Panel 1:
- TB: “Cool! I’m Theo Barnaby, I’m a musician!”
- “We…”
Panel 2:
- TB: “We should team up!”
- “Against that dragon?”
Panel 3: CC: “Hmmmm.”
Panel 4:
- CC: “Okay.”
- TB: “Yaaay!”
Page 9:
- TB: “Adventure awaits!”
- Title: “And so the quest begins”
Edited by Anaiira: Some Really Excellent Critique: Found here.
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