Sorry guys. You'll just have to deal with my awful writing. The 9 page thumbs are sort of rough draft-ish ideas. The first 7 panels were one storyline and then I thought about it and it really didn't seem all that awesome to me, so I restarted from panel 5 onwards. (So the eight panel is page 6 on v. 2)
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Page 7 v2 script:
Theo: I suck.
Claudia: No! That was original! (Or, alternatively, I was thinking she would be more blunt) Yeah, well. kinda.
Theo: I can't even get the perennial classic 'On the Twelfth Day of Holiday Celebrating the Birth of a Demigod My Amorous Companion Bestowed Upon me Some Slaves and Farm Animals' right.
Claudia: Well. It's not quite as catchy as I remember it.
Theo: I suppose I should just keep practicing....
Claudia: No! No. No no no. No. I think perhaps we should take our chances. Perhaps the DANGEROUS ravine would only be dangerous.
Theo: Ohh. What's the use.
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